PLEASANTVIEW, multiple prize-winning Trinidadian story-novel

PLEASANTVIEW: A Novel in Stories
CELESTE MOHAMMED
Ig Publishing
$16.95 trade paper, available now

Rating: 4* of five

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The Publisher Says: Coconut trees. Carnival. Rum and coke. To many outsiders, these idyllic images represent the supposed easy life in Caribbean nations such as Trinidad and Tobago. However, the reality is far different for those who live there—a society where poverty and patriarchy savagely rule, and where love and revenge often go hand in hand.

Written in a combination of English and Trinidad Creole, Pleasantview reveals the dark side of the Caribbean dream. In this novel-in-stories about a fictional town in Trinidad, we meet a political candidate who sets out to slaughter endangered turtles for fun, while his rival candidate beats his “outside-woman,” so badly she ends up losing their baby. On the night of a political rally, the abused woman exacts a very public revenge, the trajectory of which echoes through Pleasantview, ending with one boy introducing another boy to a gun and to an ideology which will help him aim the weapon.

Merging the beauty and brutality of Trinidadian culture evoked by writers such as Ingrid Persaud and Claire Adam with the linguistic experimentation of Marlon James’s A Brief History of Seven Killings, Pleasantview is a landmark work from an important new voice in international literary fiction.

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My Review: PLEASANTVIEW is a mixed-idiom collection of Trinidadian fictions that's come in for a heaping helping of praise and prizes...albeit from very literary sources...was my next foray (after If I Survive You) into Caribbean-inflected English-language storytelling. What a dramatic difference between the two projects.

Where Escoffery's Booker-nominated Jamaican-American work was firmly set in the US, this delightful braid of nine stories is emphatically not about, for, or inclusive of US sensibilities. For this reader, that is a feature not a bug. While Author Mohammed does maintain Standard English spellings throughout the book, her inflections and emphases are decidedly NOT Standard English. Her characters would likely struggle to speak Standard English. Those of us without our life-experience being inclusive of other forms of English will likely have to make an effort to get into the flow of this idiom. It is always a good idea for everyone to read in and about areas that are not centering our own unique experiences. This task is made easier, and harder, when reading English that is not the same as the English most of my readers speak. The effort one puts in to see this magnificent, flexible tool of a language used in unfamiliar ways is a big benefit to those who make it. We're seeing our words and our understanding of them used and applied to think thoughts we could never come up with. Isn't that the entire point of reading fiction? Stretch your horizons a bit more with every read.

I am sure you're expecting that I will use the Bryce Method of offering a story-by-story opinion of each piece. Well, you lose this time. The nine stories are:

Prologue: The Dragon's Mouth (Bocas del Dragón)
Endangered Species
White Envelope
The Ides of March
Home
Loosed
Six Months
Santimanitay
Epilogue: Kings of the Earth

I've chosen not to review them individually this time because that is just not the point of this exercise; no one story here is exciseable from its context to present on its own as a really satisfying story. Contrast this with the above-referenced If I Survive You, whose stories are satisfying as stories, if slightly less so as a braid; but they weren't written to be one, so that's not shade. The difference is in expectations. Interconnected stories share a lot of themes, or characters, or settings; braided stories share all of those things and operate towards one storytelling goal, as novels do, though without a novel's unity of voice and/or purpose.

PLEASANTVIEW succeeds as a braid of stories, a polyvocal novel, in a way that a more ordinary novelistic structure would strain to match. It succeeds on its own terms, and offers us as readers access to a very different way of being in the world. The best kind of fiction, then, is what this is.

Beautiful Tropical Getaway (to 1845!) for Snowed-In Folks 10 December 2013

AS FLIES TO WHATLESS BOYS
ROBERT ANTONI
Akashic Books
$15.95 trade paper, available now

Rating: 4* of five

The Publisher Says: In 1845 London, an engineer, philosopher, philanthropist, and bold-faced charlatan, John Adolphus Etzler, has invented machines that he thinks will transform the division of labor and free all men. He forms a collective called the Tropical Emigration Society (TES), and recruits a variety of London citizens to take his machines and his misguided ideas to form a proto-socialist, utopian community in the British colony of Trinidad.

Among his recruits is a young boy (and the book's narrator) named Willy, who falls head-over-heels for the enthralling and wise Marguerite Whitechurch. Coming from the gentry, Marguerite is a world away from Willy's laboring class. As the voyage continues, and their love for one another strengthens, Willy and Marguerite prove themselves to be true socialists, their actions and adventures standing in stark contrast to Etzler's disconnected theories.

Robert Antoni's tragic historical novel, accented with West Indian cadence and captivating humor, provides an unforgettable glimpse into nineteenth-century Trinidad & Tobago.

My Review:

We sat in silence, exhausted, filled-up. We didn't move. We couldn't have moved--not a muscle--because we didn't exist yet. Neither me nor him. Only the story existed, during those few final moments of silence after my father's voice had come to a halt.

Catnip. This book was catnip for me, pure uncut catnip of the finest grade. Robert Antoni teaches master's degree fiction-writing classes at the New School. Lucky men and women who take the classes, to hear him tell his stories!

At its heart, this is a simple tale of greed, passion, and the lifelong effects of believing in a dream. Chicanery is always a worry for the True Believer, because the promise of a dream come true is ever the best bait to lure them into disaster, personal and financial and, not infrequently, mortal. Something dies when a person's True Belief is taken from them, or lost, or simply abandoned (as if this abandonment is ever simple). Many times, I suspect, the pain of it is unendurable and the bereft believer sees no reason to go on...disease or despair carry him off.

Others, like our narrator Willy, live on and make life, actual life, work for them without dreams, but with some weird, warped hopes left, hopes that don't see much daylight as the ex-dreamer isn't likely to chat them about. Willy doesn't really want to have hopes. He wants to find his dreams. I think all of us know that quest's end. But the novel, well, a novel is a place to work out the truths of endings and the frailties of beginnings. This novel's truth is in the ending, and it stings the soft places of a tender soul. It also rings perfectly true and wistfully beautiful. A family, once created, is a hard thing to leave, to destroy; even death doesn't do the job.

But most families have invisible members. Some have more than others. Willy...Mr. Tucker, as he becomes...carried the invisible members of his family until, exhausted, he lost the eternal battle with gravity. How, and why, and what he made, these are all the subject of the novel, and the meat of life as we all live it.

Only most of us don't have beautiful words to wrap our truth in. Fortune smiled on William Tucker. His truth comes enrobed in lovely, lovely language, satisfyingly musical in the inward ear.

A pleasure of a read. A lovely artifact of a book. A delight on many levels, and a deeply felt, deeply moving novel.


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