THE FITFUL SLEEP OF IMMIGRANTS, messy the way life is, real the way fiction needs to be

THE FITFUL SLEEP OF IMMIGRANTS
ORLANDO ORTEGA-MEDINA
Amble Press (non-affiliate Amazon link)
$9.99 Kindle edition, available now

Rating: 3.5* of five

The Publisher Says: Award-winning author and immigration attorney Orlando Ortega-Medina returns to 1990s San Francisco in The Fitful Sleep of Immigrants, a powerful family drama that plays out within a captivating legal thriller.

Attorney Marc Mendes, the estranged son of a prominent rabbi and a burned-out lawyer with addiction issues, plots his exit from the big city to a more peaceful life in idyllic Napa Valley. But before he can realize his dream, the US government summons his Salvadoran life-partner Isaac Perez to immigration court, threatening him with deportation.

As Marc battles to save Isaac, his world is further upended by a dark and alluring client, who aims to tempt him away from his messy life. Torn between his commitment to Isaac and the pain-numbing escapism offered by his client, Marc is forced to choose between the lesser of two evils while confronting his twin demons of past addiction and guilt over the death of his first lover.

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My Review: Very interesting take on the insanely vicious US immigration system pre-marriage equality. Add in a battle against the monster of addiction and you have quite a ride of a read.

People driven to action by ever more foreclosed options to achieve their goals are the raw meat whose roast-and-veggies we call fiction. Marc's dark past includes substance abuse and a very troubling death. He's haunted by the way his ability to be there for and give help to Isaac is limited by his past.

So far, so good. The story's got lots of material anyone over, say, 25 or 30 will relate to. What keeps a fifth star off my rating is the sheer idiocy of a lawyer not knowing for sure and certain his own intimate partner's immigration status! He wasn't born in the US, and you never asked? "Honeybunch, let's get you a bank account, so whip out the green card." This is lax in the extreme and no lawyer I've ever known would just not think to check on this even if not formally.

While I had fun reading the book I was never swept into the story. It is all down to me being picky about the thinking-through of characters' reasonable actions and responses.

THE SAVIOR OF 6TH STREET does not earn my praise

THE SAVIOR OF 6TH STREET
ORLANDO ORTEGA-MEDINA
Kindle edition (non-affiliate Amazon link)
$9.99, available now

Rating: 3* of five

The Publisher Says: Urban Magical realism novel for fans of Haruki Murakami, Toni Morrison, and Junot Diaz

Deserted by his father at the age of four and raised by his voodoo queen mother on the fringes of Skid Row, Los Angeles street artist Virgilio Santos believes it his mission to save the down-and-outers in his neighborhood. But when he crosses paths with Beatrice Schein, an alluring Westside art collector with an aim to promote him to the international art world, Virgilio is tempted to turn his back on his friends. That is, until he discovers that Beatrice's father is a principal financier of organized crime in his neighborhood with plans to tear it all down for redevelopment.

'Rendered with urgent intensity, The Savior of 6th Street is a literary tour de force that confirms Orlando Ortega-Medina as one of the most original storytellers of our time.' (quote unattributed in the original)

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My Review: Need I belabor the "Virgilio/Virgil" and "Beatrice" call-backs to The Divine Comedy? There's really all you need to know in this book's defecnse. We're on A Quest, we will be meeting adversaries, we will not feel fully present in the narrative...unless the author puts it in the first person of course! So the author puts it in the first person.

The inclusion of a trans character in Concha gets this book a slot in the #PrideMonth blast. Also, the author's latesr book will be reviews in less than an hour. The fact is, I'm not a fan of this fantasy retelling of Divine Comedy. Santería, the magic system we get in this magical-realist novel, does as little for me as other variations on catholicsm do. Putting it in a first-person retelling of Dante's epically long, epically weird poen, only in prose, got an amused smile at the conceit. The execution doesn't match the ambition for me.

As rhetorical stand-ins for the forces of gentrification as expressions of the rancid neoliberal hellscape of 21st century LA, the author's villains are fine caricatures. The issue of writing an otherwise straightforward story of a talented, impoverished nobody finding his voice and getting the attention he merits as a modern take on a world literarure monadnock is the characters in the former need to be fleshed out. The characters need to command my sympathy and attention in immediate ways. In the latter, the characters are archetypes, are so removed from any need to know more than a liberal-arts course teaches you about them (relegated to the footnotes) that drawing deeper lines around them is akin to touching up Mona Lisa with some pink acrylic to make her skin look more "realistic".

A book equivalent of a pot of pink axrylic gets stars for ambition not achievement.